Cha...dude
Ok it is a bit sloppy...and off beat and out of tune...but so is life. Great job with the ending. The timing made it loop just write.,oops I mena right....see no one's perfect...even at 4am in the mornin. You keep up your creative edge...and soon you'll have a title and everything. Wish my shit were on here...how long did it take for you to get your song on? Sorry, back to the critique....great effort...now finish the darn song already. Peace, bra.