I expect a lot more great things here...

This is a great piece of work, with this I expect you to blow tons more people away with things like this.

Whiney?

Like I would belive that this was great! One of my favorites

Excellent

Seriously, it isn't "whiney" - It's deep actually.
Your songs are amazing, especially since you're a solo act.

Damn!

If this isn't good enough for you well, it's perfectly awesome to me!

Good

While it's true your voice could be polished more, a lot depends on personal tastes. The tone termed "whiney" by the previous poster is no obstacle to me. I'm also a fan of the screamo elements.

Very good midi music. If you didn't have good software and good mixing skills there's no way you could pull this off. A lot of people will doubtlessly still object to the synth music. It'd be great to hear these tracks played by an actual band, but you do about as good a job as you can with the midi.