no I'm serious !
ok I give you 5/10 because I think you got a good rythm and I like the way you play with the different sounds, I like especially when it goes up (technicaly and in english, I don't know how to say it)
The end seemed to rock before stopping stupidly on nothing and THAT'S DISGUSTING because that was when it bean to become AWESOME
AND U STOP IT RIGHT THERE???? shame on u !
make a full song dammit I wanna hear a FULL SONG !!