Decent

So this was some decent sound here you really have a nice "SOUND" here but seems like it could have more depth maybe more other instramental sounds and for sure make this longer, but you have a nice sound here and hope you make something even better of it.

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seems like it could have more depth maybe more other instramental sounds and for sure make this longer

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U gootta do this again

It has potential U should add a sax in htere