Score: 8
"Okay, but..."
date: July 29, 2009
What you have already is really good. You obviously know the piece well, but there was no real build-up to the piece and no development after the main theme.
Might I suggest that, if the mood takes you, to think about the song some more and bring in some original development to it, and maybe even a build-up to the piece? No disrespect to you, as I've already stated what you have is extremely good, but it is my opinion that to serve this piece the full justice it deserves you need to develop it more.
I'm going to give you an eight out of ten based on the fact that what you have here already is excellent. But please try to bear in mind what I have said, this does have potential to be a full ten out of ten piece.
