Alright...

A bit around 20 seconds to 40 seconds into the song as well as other parts that the combination of sounds were used, the amount of beats used caused it to sound to me like it's frozen or it's a broken record. You probably could've changed this if you had either taken out one or two of the extra beats, or if you had made at least a slight change in pitch. I get the feeling you were trying to make it sound as though it's one continuous sound or something else, unfortunately I don't think it's possible to group that burst of sound so it sounds like it is. I'm younger than 20, so you'll probably want to take my opinion with a grain of salt. ^,^; Either way... don't give up! Kay'? >:l

Some parts need more energy

Transitions are way too bland. Sounds are ol school. Am I playing sega genesis columns music? That's what I feel listening to this. A interesting attempt to make a soft-core techno. Too soft though and gets me feeling tired. Your improving fast. Keep it going.