Score: 7
"Nice!"
date: January 15, 2008
Very nice job! To start out i'd like to say that the melody you start out with is good but perhaps should vary? For example instead of having it the same over and over you could change the chord it's in... this would make thing's much more interesting!
I like the percussion and the strings very much! Short and intense, this could do great as a soundtrack for a movie scene. I can't seem to think of too much else to say. (It is a short song).
I think this could be much more powerful if you manipulated your volume more. For example if you went from soft to loud using crescendos and diminuendos this song would be soo much more awesome! If you threw in some tempo changes here and there it would spice things up as well!
