Needs work...

I kinda don't like the song between 0:03 and 0:33... It starts alright, but the main melody sounds annoying...
It gets pretty good after 0:33, you should've made a song that focuses on that part.
This song has more potential, and could be longer too.

Nice

A tad repeditive, although I like it. It really had no climax though - it was all the same. The instrument at the end was a nice touch. :D

I rated 8/10 because I think it has a lot of quality, yet it failed on the things I mentioned above. Keep them coming, mate!