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Uploaded
Aug 3, 2007 | 12:15 PM EDT
File Info
Song
1.7 MB
1 min 52 sec
Score
4.18 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 4.18 / 5 stars
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Genres:
Electronic - Techno
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Author Comments

A nice first upload. Enjoy! =D

Reviews


Wwp2Wwp2

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Niice

Since iv made songs with just one melody I cant complain about that. So im just gonna say that it need some harder synts to it, to make it a more club hit. Otherwise iv got nothing bad to say obout it :)



reshethresheth

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

not too shabby

You get seven stars for knowing how to use the program you used well, but you lost a few because there is no melodic variation. It gets a little old after a while. Try to add things, change the beat around, or something like that.

Do you use FL7?



seventysevenseventyseven

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

great job

i really liked this. it realy has a nice grove to it and enjoyed listening to it. It sounded very professional; however, i do think it needed a bigger kick and more variaion. But overall i was impressed with the song. nice one!


TriState responds:

Thanks man. Glad you liked it!


NavNav

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Nice!

So, this is a good first submission, so I will assume that you have been making music for a bit.

The first thing I noticed was that there was a bit of static on the high frequencies, try filtering to remove.

The second thing I noticed, was that it was repetitive. It is pretty much the same theme with a few minor changes, for about 2 minutes. Now, if it was an eight minute trance song, that would be ok, but it is very short, so try either extending it or making it longer.

The third thing I noticed was that the background synth with a phaser on it should have been a bit more dry.

The kick was not strong enough, try adding a multiband and adding more bass, and then trying to eq it to as close to 0 as you can without going over.

Now, for the most important part - post production mastering. I noticed how the waveform did not seem compressed or soft-clipped, and that is good. However, I did notice that the master track was eqed, and that is OK, as it is minor.

Now, I liked the complex bass rhythm, but I would have preferred to see it sidechained to the kick, as that makes it duck when the kick plays.

I also like the reverb on the snare, it makes the atmosphere better.

Overall, I liked it, but there were a few details I would have filled in had I been making it.

9/10


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TriState responds:

Thanks for the details. I'll be sure to look at the song later and fix some things. Thanks again!


Father-of-DeathFather-of-Death

Rated 5 / 5 stars

DAAAAAAAAAAAAMN!!!!!

PROFESIONAL!!!!

You are amazing my friend!!!

God i'm ganna show this to my friends. This song is awsome! ^^ Keep it up!


TriState responds:

Thanks man! Glad you enjoyed it! <3