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I like this a lot. If worked on this a little more adding more a main melody or what ever it could turn out to be a very nice track.
Everything fit together nice and Im all about originality and that's why this is a great track. Great job!
Not my favourite
I think that this piece needs something else in it to carry it forward - it just sounds like a short, repetitive loop of the same beats and a dull sounding backing tune. I know it sounds harsh, but from the others of your pieces that I have listened to, I know that you can outdo this piece by far.
Plenty more variation is called for, perhaps with synths or keyboards just to relieve the monotony of this piece, as it doesn't even see to serve too well as a menu tune - people would get bored of the game or movie menu after too little of this tune had been played, I'm afraid to say,
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A really great song, if not completely techno. The whole continual synth back ground sound was great, really added to the mood of the song. The percussion was good, at some points it got a little repetitive, but I enjoyed it allot. Keep up the good work.
Kind regards -
Well, I try to convey how I feel about my life without having to say any words, which is pretty much my entire inspiration to make music, and seeing as my life is really repetative, I try to put that across in a way which tries not to be tedious, but for all my efforts I suppose I'm not too great at it ahah.
Thanks though, your comments are greatly appreciated.
has a nice beginning, but it doesn't sounds like techno, at least the first minute... the beat you added later was nice, but is a little simple, i feel it too quiet and calm, i wish it had a lot more of movement and weren't so repetitive i got tired a little before it finished, anyway it was a nice backgrounds music and i think it will fit a lot better on other type of song, but the combination you made here wasn't very good
Ah well I'll try better next time, If I can ever be bothered making any more music, college is just a bit too much for me at the moment.
But Thanks! It is appreciated.
I thought it was very simplistic, perhaps a little bit too much though. I thought after awhile the song got very repetitive. It was a nice beat though and it was a pretty good song to listen to. I think perhaps it's something that would be pretty good to use over an introduction or maybe even the credits of a flash submission. Probably not so much as in a flash animation itself, but probably during the intro/credits.
Overall - Perhaps it needs a little bit more variety, but what you had was done well and might be useful in a flash some way. Good job and keep up the good work. Good luck on any future submissions.
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Thanks, I try, but there's always room for improvement, and your advice will be not go un noticed :)
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