hmmm..
the intro is kinda boring lol, and the twinklething in the backround gets annoying
but thats the only 2 bad things in this, its really laid back, perfect for realxing on the beach, watching girls in bikinis lol
you could have done more with the trumpet, the drums are straight good rythm
the organ or whatever this is that kicks in is kinda weird
but you still learnin, like i do lol
if you need help man just pm me
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