umm..

Nice dnb preset.

CHEA

Now this is it This is what i been looking for from your songs This is ON FIRE!!! Great song had my attention the whole time great song R-play gives this a 10/10 its a must by must have and im looking forward to some more Drum and Bass keep it up.

seems like u took drankin larkintree

i love da mood of da song ya boi can get wild n naked 2 diz mothafucka shitt wen i heard diz song i took a big fat ass motha fuckin shit in my drawz niggga.. i had sex 2 ur song last night n lest just say it waz fuckin wild can u make a sex song dat would b nice my dude... well peace imma b checkin up on u and imma make songs 2 u try 2 compete wif u... ~1~

Nice for a frirst try.

Nice job for a first try.
I see you used a crappy FL break beat i suggest you should make your own.
Also the track is kinda messy in a few places you should EQ the sounds a bit more.
But the melody that comes in is very nice.
I can tell thay you put most the effort in the melody wich is good. but you shold but more to the drums.

My tip to you is to make more efforts on the beats and drums give them some more punch.
Try to use some external plugins for the beat. (I suggest battery 3) so you can add the sounds you like and make the beat in the piano roll.

But keep it up i hope to hear more drum n bass from you

I really like it but...

the crash you added for some reason almost killed my ears... I'm still not even completly awake after writting this. just tone down the volume gain or put envelope on something like next time. Great Job! plus i love the leading melody!
vote: 5/5
Review: 10/10