great

not as good as some of your other songs keep it up though

Sweet! No fault, all fun.

Ive now listened to all your work (on ng) and i think that (for the very most part) you really cannot be faulted. Some of your songs could have been better, which u recognized yourself, but all are pleasant to listen too. Please make more, you are awesome. Why not call this song fun?

awesome

dude awesome i really liked it though it kinda got repetitive close towards the end. whatever. doesn't matter, cause the rest was awesome.

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Are you sure you didn't steal this melody from Another Place?(This Song)

ooh..

Much better than your other one, it's melody seems to be similar to something else i've heard on here, but can't remeber aexactly where, keep going!