Score: 9
"a triumph"
date: July 25, 2007
I was really impressed by this overall...!
I did however feel that the introduction was too long. It's not that I completely disliked the intro, but I thought that the repetitive melody cheapened the sophistication of the other elements - a few variations on that melody, which would compliment the other elements instead of merely playing on top of them, would perhaps bring it all together).
The other parts of the song were more cohesive and full bodied. Great work
July 25, 2007
Author's Response:
Thanks Leek. I know exactly what you mean, well hopefully I'll be able to improve my sound for the CD. Thanks again.