Yeah
I rarely, if anytime, review hip-hopz, but here goes.
It`s Midi, so it won`t play over again, so I can`t really remember all of it.
The beginning synth was great, and you worked good on the furthering.
The lyrics were kinda basic, and didn`t really say anything. They`re not really saying anything. But I liked your guitar picking, it added a nice flavour into your song.
Also, the recording was awesome, I heard no clipping!
Improvements, I`d say yes. Make it longer! If there are lyrics in a song, chances are that no Flash author will use it. If no Flash author uses it, then there`s no reason for making it short.
So i`d like to hear a full song, with better and more lyrics, and if you do that, keep it up!
<3 from Review Request Crew