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Me on guitar, Mrbungl3 on bass, SSDeliverBomb wrote the whole thing.

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Average Score: 7.6 / 10

Score: 8

"Fooking biss"

by: FlameMesial

date: July 11, 2007

You've got some meaty riffs in this song bro, the tone is amazingly beefy aswell.

All it needs is a drumset playing in the background, and rivaling metalheads will be at your mercy :D

Very cool indeed, another 4rt
\m/ Flame

Author's Response:

You're the first one not to bash the clarity of the song, thanks lol. I need to get some better drumtracks than BeatCrap has...anyway, thanks for the review, and i've already checked out your shit, you're a friggin' maniac man!

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Score: 9

"Pretty cool."

by: Bad-Man-Incorporated

date: July 5, 2007

The entire idea of this song is cool as hell. There are distortion issues, but meh..I still know what the song sounds like. I think its awesome that you do collabs with people. I think when using real instruments, these collabs are alot harder to accomplish, then say the FL or Reason collabs. We have to do our collabs mainly by ear and send a big file back and forth...etc etc. Those other guys send a small file that fills in all the "everything they need" So anyways, kudos on that. Maybe one day you and I will be doing a collab.

As far as the playing goes, pretty awesome man. If I may suggest, if you want free and a bit better or different tones, you can download a trial version of guitarfx 3. I have a shitload of awesome presets for it...you will like alot of them. They sound fantastic live, but a tad flat on the record...but a little panning fixes that.

So anyways man, done my thing...so here's teh VOTE

Thanks for your vote, Bad-Man-Incorporated! You voted 5 for Unfinished Metal Collab, raising its score from 2.33 to 3.00

Author's Response:

I certainly look forward to the day when i'm doing a metal collab with the Bad Man. Until then, send me those damned presets! I'll grab guitarfx3 and see if I can't fix the buzz and clarity issues on the distortion. SSDeliverBomb will be doing vox for this track when his mic comes in on Friday, so that's something to look forward to. And you're right, when you're collabing with people over the internet with real instruments and vocals, shit gets complicated quick. Hit me up in messenger man.

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Score: 7

"Hmmm... quite gritty !"

by: Gorekiller

date: July 5, 2007

...Dude, the clarity, at the beginning, was a bit lame, but during the whole thing, was much better. However, I'm desapointed there aren't any drums. I hope you'll remake this, with a drums kit this time ! Otherwise, good job on it.

-Gorekiller-

Author's Response:

Well it is called "*Unfinished* Metal Collab", isn't it? I plan on drums, full bass and vocals, and cleaning up the clarity problem. Thanks for the feedback.

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Score: 4

"Real gritty"

by: Stereocilia

date: July 5, 2007

Can't really hear anything because the dist on the guitar is distorting so bad. not good distortion, but recording level overload distortion. clear it up, and it'll be tons better.

Author's Response:

The effort, diversity and originiality you scored is a pretty harsh assessment, all our effort is going into this, and as far as originality and diversity, i'd say it's about as diverse and original as any other song in the AP. I agree with the recording level overload comment, and i'm working to resolve it, but I can't say I agree with your overall assessment of the song.

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Score: 10

"very nice"

by: Natedogg12181373

date: July 5, 2007

you did a very good job keep it up

Author's Response:

thanks man, it'll be even better when it's finished with vocals and full bass.

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