Nice but needs work!
Your drums? Or did Bad_Man lay a hand here? ;D I guess those are drums by my old fart. haha. If not, good work on them, nice overall tone.
Sadly, the guitar tone didn't satisfied me. Very blurry to say at least. Give your guitar a little more compression do get it pumped up. Also, double the guitar layers for a thicker sound and don't forget to start EQ'ing your shit asap. You'll hear the difference. The riffs were pretty simple, though, they made their job.
Practice a little bit more on the solo, since it sounded more like a jam around then a structured solo to slap someone with. ;D
The structure of the tune was good and for your first real one it came out great.
Keep it up! :D
Thanks for your vote, DarKsidE555! You voted 4 for Fallen Shadows, lowering its score from 4.25 to 4.20.