Score: 9
"Good job, vocals need more volume"
date: July 1, 2007
No clarity in your singing this time! Sounds like you have mothballs in your mouth! Maybe your tongue was a bit big that day... that or I'm blaming it on the microphone. Is it possible to increase the volume of just the vocals?
Good tune. Good job. Good job in trying to hit those high notes, nearing your limits:)
Good job picking, few if any errors. (You can do that while singing?!?)
"Story" and lyrics good.
Good elec guitaring (elec guitaring "very good," but that's pretty normal for you:)
Unrelated: The elec guitar in the beginning of "The Dance" was good too.
Like the chord progressions used (e.g. at 5 min.)
Wow, that's a mark of a good song. Takes 5 min. but feels like two. Few songs can drag you that far without making you bored. Hadn't even noticed it was that long.
Author's Response:
The cvlarity of the vocals is actually due to me having to lower the sampling rate to 80Kbps, because of the filesize. They are perfectly clear at higher resolutions.
Yes, I can play like that while singing. lol
I'll take that as a compliment.
Glad you liked the song.
Thanks.
