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Jun 24, 2007 | 11:28 PM EDT
File Info
2.9 MB
4 min 15 sec
3.27 / 5.00

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Rated 3.27 / 5 stars
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471 Plays | 101 Downloads
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Author Comments

A new song I've worked up. Tell me what you think.



Rated 4 / 5 stars


There we're some potential parts and a lot of the beginning sounded like you were still looking for an opening.

The real problem was that a lot of it was off and on, like some parts would flow, but then it would lose it's potential by giving this feel that it would just jump into another.

A lot of the time the drums would cover up where the melody was supposed to be stronger, I would've liked to see you bring those parts out. One bad note choice in the beginning kind of ruined this more solid tone you had going.

Personally what I could see improvement in, is flow changes. A lot of the time you would just jump another part. Also when making the movement changes, try using your drums or a single opening line to go into that. Otherwise a decent song, with some great potential.

Keep working, I think you could possibly achieve a solid formula for the next part of the song, since this is only the opening/part 1.