Score: 9
"Awesome."
date: June 23, 2007
I'm a huge fan of Bach myself, and this does sound like something he would write.
A few elements of Bach I think you missed out on here:
Normally he would have one key dedicated to playing off the beat, where melody would be on counts of 1, 2, 3, 4 and the offbeat in between, normally a middle-range note that reflects the key and changes on occasion. Also, your piece lacked treble. A little bit of ornamentation on the right hand never hurts.
Also, I can almost hear an awesome second section coming after this ends, this would make a great intro to a larger scale piece.
Great piece. You seem to be very good at barouque, I can recommend a few people you should listen to to hone that talent and help develop a more solid style.
Author's Response:
thank you very much!
i will try everything you advised.
i think it dosent sound very teble cuz i wrote it for piano, but i put guitars and base in.
i forgot that when u tell a bass or guitar to play somthing, it acutaly sounds it an 8ctv lower then what its actualy playing.
i think i will make a second part to it
thanks for your review!