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Uploaded
Jun 23, 2007 | 3:11 PM EDT
File Info
Song
1.6 MB
1 min 47 sec
Score
4.13 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Score:
Rated 4.13 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
655 Plays | 117 Downloads
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Genres:
Electronic - Trance
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Author Comments

My newest trance song, for now i'd say my best, review :]

Reviews


cRAVE01cRAVE01

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

not bad

This is decent trance you've got going here. The arrangement is great; altho, the lead synth in the beginning is WAY too "IN YO FACE!" and kinda throws me off in the beginning. The distortion on the gutar is a good idea . . . but it needs tweeking b/c something about it doesn't sound quite right to my ear. I love the pad you chose ^_' keep at it, cuz this is pretty good


dJViZ responds:

thanks* and yes i agree, but ive just started making music, im still very below average :]


lmaobananalmaobanana

Rated 5 / 5 stars

YAY!

this ones really good, i like the guitar(or the synth that sounds like a guitar, but lets not be picky)its really good quality too, and very happy. it made my go like ^_^


dJViZ responds:

thanks :]


Music-storyMusic-story

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Smiles on the description

Well only two songs so I suppose this is your best. Clarity has been improved alot. Now one more thing to add. Your timing of some of the notes is off ever so slightly yet noticeable. I like the crazy guitar. A few off key moments or maybe on key moment but not the proper mix. I can see what your doing with the whole buildup thing. Slowly add new instruments on top then make the guitar play a faster yet still similar beat. I wish you could have changed the fuzzy bass rhythm. Heh. The ending is funny. Thought you were going for a fade out but nope the clashing of cymbals. Not really the best ending but still a better ending than some other songs on NG. Despite me asking you for more diversity, it really isn't applicable to the trance genre. I just like diverse stuff more. Anyway great guitars with some awesome reverb or whatever you did to make them all atmosphery sounding. 5/5 and 9/10 rev. Your getting alot better...reason to smile. Bye for now


dJViZ responds:

<3 music story's reviews, help me a lot lol


Dj-UnKnOwNDj-UnKnOwN

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Good job!

Nice job on your second song! And yes, this is your best song to date. But the song was lacking precussion... the only drum beat that was in the song was in the beginning! Other than that, the song was really erm... "groovy" a very catchy melody, and well organized, just need to add precussion, and work on making your beatz all flow together well, something sounds sound off-beat. Also, i was really digging the ending, it ended abruptly.
Voted 5/5 and 10/10
Awesome work on your second song, keep it up!
Thanks for your vote, Dj-UnKnOwN! You voted 5 for {United Fire}, raising its score from 4.00 to 4.25.

Dj UnKnOwN


dJViZ responds:

Thanks alot, you'll have to come over to touch it up lol


TMM43TMM43

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

voted 4

WOW. This is a pretty cool song you have here! I like the melody and everything. One problem though. The guitar seems a little loud at times and really drowns out everything. Fix that.

I really like your work on this song. Keep it up!
9/10
4/5


dJViZ responds:

Thanks! Ill let you know when the new version comes out