solid theme, flow, weak perc, good imagery.
Again I am hearing those crash cymbols. You seem to like them a lot. Be careful how you use them :D!
The progressive piano really does make me think of a river scene, and the synths you have layered over the piano does a good deal as well imagery wise.
I like how you had a little piano solo near the end, and then how you decided to take the piano at the end.
It also loops well.
I find myself repeating a lot, this songs weakest part is the percussion. The volume levels this time for all the instruments are actually quite pleasent! It's good to hear you grasp a better handle on that!
I can hear your improvement with each song! Keep up the good fight and keep em coming!