Score: 7
"solid theme, flow, weak perc, good imagery."
date: August 14, 2007
Again I am hearing those crash cymbols. You seem to like them a lot. Be careful how you use them :D!
The progressive piano really does make me think of a river scene, and the synths you have layered over the piano does a good deal as well imagery wise.
I like how you had a little piano solo near the end, and then how you decided to take the piano at the end.
It also loops well.
I find myself repeating a lot, this songs weakest part is the percussion. The volume levels this time for all the instruments are actually quite pleasent! It's good to hear you grasp a better handle on that!
I can hear your improvement with each song! Keep up the good fight and keep em coming!
December 20, 2007
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks for the reviews. It was a while ago I said I'd respond to all of these, but I was too lazy, I guess. Anyways, I might as well say that I'm planning to give this song a makeover, add more melodies and harmonies into it, extend it, turn it into a more well rounded piece, although I won't get around to that until some time next year.
Cheers, MaestroRage.