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Uploaded
Jun 19, 2007 | 8:24 PM EDT
File Info
Song
1.6 MB
1 min 45 sec
Score
2.53 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Score:
Rated 2.53 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
483 Plays | 134 Downloads
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Genres:
Electronic - Techno
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Author Comments

My first complete song, comments and reviews-constructive critcism please!

Reviews


lmaobananalmaobanana

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

:D

well this was good, axcept it was too loud or something and it got really low quality/distorted. besides that i like it lots!


dJViZ responds:

thanks again!


tomatbigtitstomatbigtits

Rated 0 / 5 stars

Thia aong blows

HI nick this song sukcs


dJViZ responds:

^ my dumb friend :] 0-0-0-0 lol


Music-storyMusic-story

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Welcome my good man

Good to see someone new visiting and contributing to the audio portal. Now about this song. I think you need to do a sound balance checkup. Lots of clipping going on. What program do you use? Anyway I suggest that whenever you make a song always check the volume bar. If it reaches red then you will likely get lots of clipping. Clarity is something I still have problems with but it is probably the biggest factor that makes a song good or bad. Now I'm not gonna be all harsh on you since this is your first time. I'm gonna list the good points. That happy pad/synth you used I really enjoyed. Some other bits were dreamy too. I can sense a good deal of diversity compared to other techno songs I've heard. As you can tell from my music, I love diversity and also respect ppl that go diverse with their stuff. Sign of a creative mind. Now I would like to see even more diversity, but if you like your style then by all means continue. I'm not here to change ppl style. My stuff isn't good so why would anyone want to copy me. :) I'll start you off with a 5/5 and a 10/10 review. Compared to my first song ever, this owns mine. Bye for now


dJViZ responds:

Thanks, I really enjoy your stuff especially your rave song MS override I think it was, well anyway... I'll be sure to a sound balance check up!...I am working on the song as we speak so we'll see how it turns out


Dj-UnKnOwNDj-UnKnOwN

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

It was ok

Great job on your first song! Some of the notes did sound off key. And it doesn't really have any structure, like i was telling you before, it needs to flow well, and some parts flow really well, but the transitioning isnt so great. But great use of sounds, i liked the distortion, this song has a lot of potential, and if you work on it a little while longer, i'm sure something awesome will come of it =)

Voted 4
Thanks for your vote, Dj-UnKnOwN! You voted 4 for Take You Away, raising its score from 3.00 to 3.33.


dJViZ responds:

Thanks, Im working on it...soon enough the new version will be up