Score: 7
"decent perc, transitions awkward, good vibe"
date: August 14, 2007
The percussion for this song is definitely a lot better. Much more solid, much more powerful! However this song does not loop, cuts off abruptly.
The synths you have, though not properly mastered, present an excellent theme. I love that shrill synth you have up there, very slick! When that raw saw comes in, the percussion loses a bit of stability with the crashes, but still manages to assist, not damage the song.
A rather quick change and cut off at 0:55. It's like two short loops put together in one, and another sudden change again at 1:13 ish. Be carefuly how you transition moments like that, especially in loops where the player might be listening to it over and over, they easily become tiring to listen to.
I enjoy listening to your progress, you're definitely moving along nicely! Lets see how your other submissions are. Keep up the good fight and keep em coming!
August 18, 2007
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks so much for your reviews. Now that they're working, I'll respond to them all.
I really appreciate the amount of detail you put in your reviews, it's very honest and I'm glad you picked up things I wasn't aware of, I'm sure I can make a giant leap in progress with quality from this.
Thanks a million.