Ok then.

This was drastically in need of different synths, and TONS more... everything else that is missing. (almost everything lol)

The melody (of what I could hear, the synth chosen kind of burried it with the constant rattle) Was pretty good, and did sound very Oriental, so I think a much different synth (I read a review here suggesting Violin, DO IT!) and a bunch more everything else, and this could actually be something that doesn't take work to listen to.

Score work (Meaning, the written melodies and such) = 6/10

Instrument/s chosen = 0/10

Painful and hard to listen to = -2

Because I just feel like being a jerk right now (And because the initial ringing burned my ears, more pain...) = -2

over all... 2/10...

I do think you can do better than this.

it's was bethoveen

DUDE U JUST BREAK MY EAR...

wow.

yes it DOES need work, and DO work on it. good luck with the BETTER version.

Terrible

My farts sound better than this

Ok ouch

I just got violently ear humped by a dagger
and it wasn't pleasant.