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It is a nice day out today, which I feel played a role in the sound of my latest song!

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Average Score: 5.2 / 10

Score: 3

"boring"

by: frito-bandito

date: April 27, 2004

this is just boring, you really need to try to make some better melodies and be able to vary it more through the song

you like to pitch drums up and down a lot, but it almost never sounds good with the melody

if you took some of your style right now, and applied it to a more structured form of writing music, i think you would be writing a lot better.
you may get points for being original sometimes, but just bc ur the first to do something doesnt mean that it is good

stick with it, and try to be more melodic, or even just structured if you like rhythm more.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!
I am now working on something that has a lot better beat to it, I will hope you will like that one, the main block I am having with it is not being able to find the sound I want to add to it, and as I am sure you know, Fruity Loops is huge, so it can take a while to find and tweek just the sound oyu want, again thank you for the review.

Mike

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Score: 3

"the audio-bot is fucked"

by: crud

date: April 24, 2004

First off, that drone note was just annoying, your beat made sense...to some extent, to the point whenn all the drums were doing there own little solo. the song is missing any sort of tension are climax or any sort of musical theory. But i ahev to say, it is good to the extent that i can hear some of the work you put into it. for about maybe an hour, then you just repeated patterns and threw them together in a shuffle. CONGRATS ON THE SECOND PLACE THOUGH!!!!

Author's Response:

Hey thanks for the review, harsh as it may be O_o
When I saw the score I thought is was going to be a really mean review.
It actually took me about 5 hours to make, you see I am real picky, I put things in, and then don't like it and switch and keep changing shit untill it's what I wanted it to sound like.
I do need to learn more about how put notes into what ever place, but as you noticed I do put time into it, as I am sure you know, when you have been working with the song for a while it get's hard to tell what you should do with the song as it all seems the same.
Any how, thank you for your review!

Mike

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Score: 7

"Not bad..."

by: Shpouiten

date: April 20, 2004

The intro beat is kinda catchy ! The thing I like in that song is the variety in the drums, I think it's really good. The file size is pretty small compared to your other songs. Anyway, not my favorite song of yours, but still pleasant to hear.

Nice work.

Author's Response:

Thank you my good man!
I did work the most with the drums, just wanted to try out some new things, I am glad you liked it, now as for me, I am off to bed, I have been up for near 24 hours!!!
Thanks again!

Mike