Thanks man! I love your stuff as well. I gotta get on and get you those wav files! Thanks for the great review, and generous scores!

Carpunch

While I prefer to create dark music and foreboding music, I personally do not consider myself "goth". I have a huge issue with LABELS like that.

While I agree with almost all your critiques it is pretty much impossible to remix the vocals. This song is one of the first I ever made on my OTHER computer. It is now my other computer because the hard drive crashed, nailing the coffin shut on all my samples I used to mix the song, and others like it. So I can't change that part; I hope the lyrics I included in the other response help you with understanding the song. As for a beat, I had no intention of creating a "beat" for it. It's sole purpose is to have a relentless, and creepy sound to the drums. I only wanted certain effects in it, so when decided how much "dark" sounds to place in, I opted to go lighter. Like I mentioned in an earlier review, the song was never MEANT to be creepy or malevolent. The song is supposed to give you the feeling... maybe this IS a song about killing the lady you love... or maybe it's about love, and just sounds kinda creepy. I will try to take as much of your advice to heart as I can. Hope you enjoyed it, and thanks for your review.

Carpunch

I'm sorry that you couldn't understand what I was saying. I have placed the lyrics for the song at the bottom of this response. Thanks for your review.

Carpunch

*lyrics*

In the morning I wake up to this cold empty space
I can't seem to remember what it was I was looking for
everything's wrong and I don't belong in this place
I can't seem to feel anything anymore, everything sore
then I fall forever staring into your face
realized I was mesmerized, your eyes
seconds of mind
sapphire shine of a kind
so beautiful it makes me...

Late at night I wake up cold in this empty case
I can't seem to remember what I was dreaming
Everything's gone, and I don't fit with this place
I can't have heard you screaming
(still hearing)
call me now and keep me forever
(lonely seconds)

seconds of mind
sapphire shine of a kind
so beautiful it makes me...

I hear you calling
and I'm still falling
screaming so clearly
bleeding so dearly
eyes mesmerizing
smile hypnotizing

seconds of mind
sapphire shine of a kind

so beautiful it makes me...

so beautiful it makes...

I originally wrote a nice sweet loving poem, about missing my girl. I then decided to place it to music and present the song to her as a gift... oddly enough the end result was a very creepy, dark, song. What originally was a love poem, turned into a song that seems more like a guy laying in bed starring at the dead eyes of his love and realizing he misses her since she's dead. I'd assume he killed her, but you never know. I also assume I put way too much thought into this shit. Thanks for your review.

Carpunch