Obsolete (Loop)

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Obsolete (Loop)

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Trying out different genres of stuff.

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BlackPlastic

2007-05-14 18:07:03

((VOTED 4))

It was okay. I mean it wasnt anything special but I didnt really expect that from a person used to making heavy metal. I really did like the synth in this song but it just seamed to alone out there. You really need to make those drums more constant in the song and dont just use that same drum noise over and over again. Mix it up a little. And maybe just add a simple constant bass line in the back just to support the main one a little. Anyways it was still a pretty cool song so I am voting 4. Good job.

shadow715 responds:

Mix it up eh? The bongos, mixed with a rock kit wasn't enough? There was a weak bass line, added punch to the bass drum. I admit that could have been better, but yeah..thanks for the input.

MortalSymphony

2007-05-14 17:35:16

It seems incomplete.

It could use a nice bass line. The drums are way too simple. The main synth doesnt't change up enough. Would be cool if you had all that. This sounds like you made it in about 5 minutes. Complete this, and make it into a full song, and it would be much better.

shadow715 responds:

Agreed, 10 minutes. Actually. There is a bass synth..that matches the bass drum..nothing spectactular. Thanks for the input. But, I fail to see how a 7 on clarity works, tho. This is pretty clear....