but i don't want to

well, this track is short, and pretty repetitive, and awkward at times. but it's also pretty unique and there are some cool layering parts at times. so there's alot that could have been worse.

the beginning was slow, which is alright because the build up was pretty nicely handled. the beat is pretty nice, and fits the song, except towards the end with the ostinato synths. at that point, the claps/whateverpercussion felt off beat and awkward, and should probably be removed/redone. the entire end itself is drawn out far too long, considering its a pretty loud main synth with a somewhat-annoying background noise.

still, the beginning is pretty nicely done, and if you worked on this one for awhile, it could be something very enjoyable. so keep it up.

if you get the time, could you check out my page and listen/review my latest song, "As the Ocean Retreats"?http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1450
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i'd appreciate it, thanks.