dare i say...

that this song needs more yiff?

anyways, its nice

liked the random low horn sound that happens at the end

main issues are using crap stock kick, not eqing, and using too generic of instruments, you should be layering if you want to use those kind of things, has a good melody though,. and potential

Cool and very original.

It needed to be longer, but everything was put so nicely together. You did a good job in timing. Keep it up!

Nice

Very interesting work. I love the way that the drums just occasionaly stop. I was dissapointed that the string synth stopped. That would have been wonderfull had it flown through out the whole piece. Nice happy melodies. Reminds me of old 8-bit games. Good stuff man. Pls chack out my stuff.