Score: 8
"good"
date: May 6, 2007
The song starts out great and has a really mysterious feeling to it but it seems to encounter some trouble when u add that kick.
The kick is to solid its to definit, it doesnt fit the unsenserity and mystery that the song has in the beging.
It's really just the fact that the song seems unpredictable and turbulant but then the kick comes in and makes the song predictable, if it didnt keep the same tempo then it might fit but otherwise it really breaks the song away from what it can truley be.
your song is good and has alot of potential but with the kick still in there it takes away from the songs quality
Author's Response:
A softer Kick would improve the song, BUT, Me being too lazy to fix it, I dont think I will. If enough people say fix it though, I will.