Score: 8
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date: April 27, 2007
^^^ :D
Well....
The beginning is lazy. Woah a kick and snare. Thats great, but put something more into the intro. Pads pads pads!
I dunno if you've ever heard Sucker Punch, but those hi hats aren't really meant to be used individually for 8th notes. It sounds awesome if you use all of them and make some crazy pattern with them.
The half-time drum pattern is pretty cool. Very original for a dnb song. Although in more advanced terms it disqualifies this song as being dnb, it still sounds cool.
What would sound leik a bilyon teims betr is if you switch back and forth between half time and normal time throughout the song. And when the drums go halftime add in some more cymbals. This already sounds awesome playing in my head :D
Bass: Awesome! Great modulation. You keep it nice and simple, which is good. You may want to add in some more distorted high frequencies, though. If you listen to greats to Unknown Error, the basses are only called basses because they used to be basses. Now they are beasts that roar and scream and kill things.
Synth pad things: Insane!!! You get good effort points for that.
However, you get lots of negative effort points for the drums. Lol. At least you used them pretty well.
Overall, the song sounds really muddy and mixed. I think it might have something to do with the Monster kick, or it's something else.
But Bass=sick and the next version of this will be awesome.
4/5
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