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but good

Two things

First of all. I really like this tune. I don't think it's too short. I have 2 things to add though. There is a part where you make the melody move up in tone. I think the second "move-up" is a false note.'

Second, I don't know which program you are using, but if you use Fruity Loops, and you want to make this a loop, you should choose Wrap Remainder instead of Leave Remainder in the Render dialog box. I think it ends too abrupt, but it would sound really cool as a loop.