Incredible...
The chirping in the background really gives this it's beautiful"ness."
Make more!
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Made for Tribal War's second largest tribe that disbanded. This is their final moments...
I thought it went like this:
"but sire, you can't die! there's still so much to accomplish!"
"then I guess *cough* you'll have to carry on *hack* the mission..."
"But I am unskilled in the ways of the sword!"
"nonsense... *cough* I've tought you everything I know, I know you can do it."
"Very well. but before you die, one last boon, my lord. *removes both swords... one at his side, and the one embedded in his stomach.*"
"t-thank you, my servant. Take my sword, complete the trial, and rise to be the greatest swordsman in history! I-I know you can do it. i-its your destiny..."
"Sire, I've always respected you and served you with all my strength. now I shall rise above you, if that is what you wish"
"go, my loyal servant. Oh, one more thing. my son is in these games too, please don't kill him"
"What is his name?"
"His name is G--*cough* *hackhack* *coughs up blood* *dies*
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! *lays over body and cries!"
kind of a tear-jerker, don't ya think?
MaestroRage responds:
Under the right circumstances it could be quite moving. However my mind works in funny ways and I automatically thought of a parody of it. If you don't mind i'd like to share it with you :D!
"but sire, you can't die! there's still so much to accomplish!"
"then I guess *cough* you'll have to carry on *hack* the mission..."
"But I am unskilled in the ways of the sword!"
"nonsense... *cough* I've taught you everything I know, I know you can do it."
"But sire... you havn't taught me anything :("
*sire begins giggling*
"Then I suppose you're screwed!"
"Very well. but before you die, one last boon, my lord." *Rips out the blade in the sire's stomach, and the blade beside him*
"HEY! WHERE ARE YOU TAKING THAT?!"
"What... this sword in your stomach?!"
"YEAH >:("
"To... to fight people, so I don't die miserably like you did"
">:("
"FINE, HAVE IT BACK!" *jabs back into stomach*
"*URGH*"
"t-thank you, my servant. Take my sword, complete the trial, and rise to be the greatest swordsman in history! I-I know you can do it. i-its your destiny..."
"I thought keeping you alive was my destiny..."
"AND WE ALL KNOW HOW THAT TURNED OUT >:(!!!!"
"OKAY OKAY, I GET IT, NEW DESTINY!"
"Sire, I've always respected you and served you with all my strength. now I shall rise above you, if that is what you wish"
"go, my loyal servant. Oh, one more thing. my son is in these games too, please don't kill him"
"What is his name?"
"You would think I would know wouldn't you?"
"You don't know your son's name?"
"Ugly little bugger he was... G... GeeHeUgly I think I named him (coughs up blood, and dies)
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! *lays over body and cries!"
Sorry, just had to ;) I hope you enjoyed the little parody, humor is the spice of life of course. Thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it!
beautiful
ok, im just gonan stop looking for bits and pieces that i dont like, because they are simply too hard to find when it comes to you >:(
Its no fun when i have to destroy my frontal lobe looking for somethign to pick at :P
so instead i will simply just sit back and enjoy the 5ness of all your music. I hereby declare a preemptive(god i hope thats the right way to spell that word lol) vote of 5/5 and review for 10/10 on all works i have not yet reviewed. just to save myself a bit of time XD
Simply beautiful piece maestro.
Please don't ever stop making music.
i'll find a necromancer to bring you back from the dead if you think you can use death as an excuse not to make music anymore :P
lol j/k
*but really....dont stop 0__o*
~Twistedtechnology
MaestroRage responds:
wow, bring me back from the dead!!?!?!?
*puts suicide pills down*
What a waste of money >: /
I'm glad you find these songs entertaining. I would of course like to remind you that you shouldn't feel obligated to review these songs, or stress yourself to find something wrong to comment on. Each piece is subjective, some people would find this full of crap and lies, and another would find it decent. Knowing that you just enjoy them, is enough for me!
Thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it!
Help me out!
You are indeed the best musician I've heard so far!
Help me out! I do get thoughts when I hear this, and I'll keep it short:
''A hero who was onces so loyal, turns into the most violent lord ever existed''
PLEASE send me a PM with a short story that might bump into you, Thanks already.
Cheers, Dennis
PS: Going to use this in one of my first creations, I'll give u a notice when I finish it
MaestroRage responds:
I think I still have the story I wrote for it somewhere. If I can find that I will send it to you right away. I don't know if I can recreate the original story for you, writing a new story would ultimately be the same as you just making one up.
I'll see what I can do!
Thanks for the review Dennis, glad you liked it!
......awsome
i hope it would be cool with you if i use this song on the home page of my website if you want to see it i will send it to you in a pm its not finished though10/10
MaestroRage responds:
by all means, use at your disposal :D! I would love to see the website of course, thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it!
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