hey, it's that dude from my school!

you're climbing the ladder, buddy, and im expecting you to be professional as possible since i can be quite critcal with your music. you know that i listen to what you're listening so this isnt any BS. good job. i appreciate making me the 1st one to hear it before you post is on.

Cool

Pretty damn good, I like the instruments

I can see y...

My 3rd audio rev. I can see how it got so many downloads. I didn't listen to the whole thing & I love it!
Just because I have a dark aura dosen't make me bad! ;)

A good first.

+ Good beats throughout the song
- The song seems to have two of itself played back to back without a third part inbetween, good for loops not good for standalone songs.
- lower level Drum lines were prettymuch the same throughout the entire song. More diversity as the song shifts would be nice.
- Everything was over normalised, you had a few instruments that stood out but the octave of everything was about equal leading to a general flatline of diversity.
= that "overbalanced instrument at :42 wansn't a problem at all, introduced variety
- That said you might have kept it up for to long.
+ Well Mastered
+ Enjoyable to listen too.

Excellent start !!!

I gave a 10 in every catagory and five on the audio. Great start keep going in that direction and you'll have diamond tracks in no time.