It's a little bit choppy, but any criticism/comments are appreciated
Very Very good.
nice little song to listen to, especially if your preparing for a big online championship or stuff. i think i could make a music video outta this, if you dont mind. but scince it sounds like a song i heard, thats why i gave it a 9 inoriginality. no offense.
No offense taken. Although I am curious as to what song you think it sounds like. Regardless, I am glad you enjoyed it, and feel free to make a video using the song.
Pretty sweet!
Yeah it's choppy but it's has a good vibe. Very nice beginning, to bad you're using a pedal, because the change till the distortion part wasn't very smooth. Afterwards it was played well but quite as hell.
Try to double your guitar lines so that you get a thicker and louder sound. Also try to compress the guitars, you will be happy with the results, if done right. ;)
Drums are programmed well, nothing to bug about here.
The bpm change and the solo near the end was sweet, very well done man. Overall a good one, just needs work with the mastering phase!
Keep it up!
Thanks for your vote, DarKsidE555! You voted 4 for Hell Hath No Fury..., raising its score from 0.00 to 2.00.
Thanks for the comment. I am going to try to fix that beginning so that it sounds more smooth. I will also try what you suggessted by doubling the guitar lines.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
xmnhx 
