Score: 8
"Hmmm"
date: July 12, 2007
So I'll start off by saying that I like your U series; I've downloaded most of them. I only have a few comments for this peice, though.
The bass drum was REALLY SQUARE. I mean, like, squre like the bass drum in a European polka band. I don't know, maybe it's just me, but the whole syncopated drum/ 'clap' is what defines hip hop. I repect the risk you took in making both the melody and bass drum line on the beat, but it doesn't really flow.
I think that if the drums were a little more syncopated and there was a little bit more high hat/ snare in combo with a more complex beat pattern, this song would truly fill it's place in the U series.
August 22, 2007
Author's Response:
lol i never really noticed... but now that u mention it it does sound pretty "square".
i dunno if thats something every1 will catch... but either way the drum beat was way too simple n repetitive lol so ill try n mix things up more in the future.
thx for the review.