Score: 6
"Well, industrial's a fun one..."
date: April 8, 2007
I made one myself... did you review it? I'm not going to bother checking right now.
Stressed, huh? Well, this song makes it evident. Weak percussion in this introduction section and clashing notes left and right, as the melody's in a different key from the bassline, as well as quality being... ouch. This is exactly what I remember from the song last time, too, so it seems you didn't do too much to change it. Mind pointing out to me what you changed?
Looking at it like an Industrial song, it's actually pretty decent but is largely lacking in the bass area. Also, I don't like those hihats... I know a pretty good Industrial drums soundfont I can share with you...
Hmm... well, you've been saying it's really good but I think this could have gone a LOT farther. Better bass, better drums, etc... (Oh, and fix that string synth, too. XD) Keep trying.
Author's Response:
I'm so pissed right now. I can't say anything good so here's your response.