Ehhh...

You say this is waay better than anything else yourve made? Wow.. Im not even gonna bother bloodying my ears on the rest of your songs.

(If only there was a -1)

not bad

sounds kinda gayish, but what do i care, most of my stuff sounds gay anyways. you've made a nice build up; the only criticism i have is the timing (not that good, not too bad either). anyways, keep it up.