nicenice

The only thing that makes your song bad is the sounds, it's normal sounds. Try to get some new sounds and plugins.
I can see that you could to a pakito of this, i will send you a pakito sound on msn later then you see the different.

Good job tho.

Its Kinda funny

Makes you wanna bob your head up n down.

could you check out my freshly baked song, I did it love in every stitch