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Another nice one
Overall this song has so many great qualities. I like the overall tone of this song, it really pleases me. Despite the euphonic voices, there are some awkward beats and rythem to you entrances, also regarding the entrances, there are some cords that sound a bit... absent. lol dont know how that works. It really takes off after the voices enter though, Great job. I really apprieciate your work!
I'm glad you feel that way. You know, entrances have always been a problem for me. Like writing a book, I could never really think of the perfect opening. To be honest, the part where the voices hops in, was the beginning of the project! I really liked how it was going, but couldn't just lay it on thick like that. So I made the intro at the end, and I just didn't know how to best portray it. I'm rather satasfied with this opening don't get me wrong, but it could be far better.
Thank you again for the review, i'm glad you liked it ^^.
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