Score: 8
"Good effort"
date: March 28, 2007
hey brandon2002
A neat idea you have going on here, you have a rather neat melody line.
I like it better when the flute is playing with the strings over the piano, I felt the piano kind of disrupted the song's flow, but with the strings, it worked marvelously.
I would recommend for the piano to be playing much deeper lower chords, or even just a constant note, to bring about more sadness.
When you mention king, I get the feeling of a sad epic, and epics use a good deal of french horns and strings. Of course I understand that you are a beginner in Fruity Loops, and it took me a good while to get good at it, this piece reminds me of my early works.
I hear some good potential in you Brandon, keep up the good fight and keep them coming! I'd like to invite you to check out my work sometime!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for your encouragment
I will defintly check out your music!