I thought...

I thought... I think it was simply lovely and beautiful.. I like it very much. Makes my heart feel something, not quite sure. But it was still so lovely...

talented u r talented

i totaly agree with meastrorage ur good but with the piano not playing a constant tune it disruots sum of the song but otherwise great id like to c more of ur work pm me the name so i can chek out ur new realese thx ps hope more people vote n listen

Good effort

hey brandon2002

A neat idea you have going on here, you have a rather neat melody line.

I like it better when the flute is playing with the strings over the piano, I felt the piano kind of disrupted the song's flow, but with the strings, it worked marvelously.

I would recommend for the piano to be playing much deeper lower chords, or even just a constant note, to bring about more sadness.

When you mention king, I get the feeling of a sad epic, and epics use a good deal of french horns and strings. Of course I understand that you are a beginner in Fruity Loops, and it took me a good while to get good at it, this piece reminds me of my early works.

I hear some good potential in you Brandon, keep up the good fight and keep them coming! I'd like to invite you to check out my work sometime!