from the sounds of it

you really dis like this Bitch!

im not sensing much love or ah... whats the word im looking for.

it sounds like shes a gothy fuck buddy you love to do coke with!

i use to have some one like that, she ODed in my car 6 months back. i will miss you my blond haired Vampire bitch

not a bad song there

Sounds Great

I like how the song started off slow and speeded up. Nice Job!

Pretty good

Pretty good work man. Keep it up. 8/10

not bad

I can dig this. I like it more then ur others, and I can tell ur just getting used to FL. Just to let u know, most people dont like the sytrus presets, cus their so over-used. Keep practicing with ur program tho, ull get good with it some day ;)
check out my song, for an example

I take it you don't like this girl that much?

Lol... Well, the song sounds over-all more saddening than lovey dovey or whatever, if you were going for something passionate, work harder at happier, more graceful sounding melodies.