not bad

You main problem is that you sound like your using fl samples/presets.. and they are really quite poor. So are the FL effects.. like that phaser, though it don't sound too bad.

The best bit about this track is how the bass sounds and sits in there nicely.

The tune doesn't seem to develop enough, the main riff stays the same FOREVER and makes the tune feel like its going on longer than it is..

The track is a bit boring and repetative though has some strong ideas, and with some work, and new samples, could be quite good.

:)!!!!!!

Not to bad your eq is pretty good, your sounds dont cancel each other out alot which is a problem that alot of people have including me, but it drags on a bit and the background synth goes on a bit. but over all nice for what you are going for.