Umm
Those synths you used are kinda weird. I like the bass though..well I'm not even sure if that is bass. I just call it the low sounding...sound. :) Woah a big change. I like it. Adds diversity but a little too sudden. Yeah again that high sounding synth is weird for this song. I also think the part where you do a fade in to silence and than back to regular volume is a good feature, but also doesn't fit. I don't know if this song is a demo since you used the word "Demo" for your 3 recent songs. They are all demos? I thought this one is the full version of the demo of your other "Rainfall" song. Oh well. A good try for doing UK Core and Dark Trance. Since your first attempt I give you 5/5 voting and 10/10 review. So umm bye for now