Should have more rhytm. To high pitch. Very repetitive. Boring after 1 : 34.
I kinda gives us the feeling that the artist did not put much work into this. It could use some more work.
But i see that there is potential and therefore give an inspiring 3.5 starts. Will change it to 4.5 if the changes are done.
Cheers
PS What are the royalties on this music, might want to use it in a adventure platformer game