I'd have preferred more layers, but cool mood and

I really like how the whole thing sounds kinda arthritic. The strange minor-key synths in the bg are kinda like wheezing and we later gets beats kinda like an old man stepping up...

And the whole minor key does sound kinda unsettling and reflect the mood well.

There's some really wierd sounds in here - some sorta squelches, paper rustling and other odd sounds. Works nicely though.

I found though that the whole thing seemed a bit lacking. I mean, after listening to it a few times, I'd had enough of it. It's well produced and all, but I'd have liked maybe a few more layers... maybe if you'd had more speech going on throughout, maybe short bits...

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Not entirely to my tastes, but definitely evokes a mood and it's good how it's a different take on the basic theme.