This song is Good But it takes a while to get to the main part of the song which I dont mind really but I really do like the main part of the song.
well done!!

This is really good =) Almost perfect because I feel there is a little emptyness. maybe athere is missing a Pad or a reverbed plucked sound panning from left to right and back.
Anyway keep it up and learn how to express your creativity EVEN FURTHER BEYOND WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!

Nice job with the atmosphere at the beginning. The piece has a really smooth and soothing vibe. The kick for the first 26 seconds is pretty weak, and I think the lead and clap at :30 both sound a bit generic. The blissful mood is good, though, and the melodic content is enjoyable. The sub-bass is a nice touch, too. I wish you had given the hi-hats a bit more of a boost in the mix (perhaps some more compression, or just lifting the treble range in the equalizer) - it’d be great if they sounded more up-front and crisp. The melodic development at 2:38 is great, though. This piece comes together really well, and sounds very climactic and conclusive. The strings at 3:03 were a nice touch as well. Overall, really strong work here, guys! ;)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.75/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
2/2
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
2/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.75/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1/1
Originality and uniqueness
.5/1
Overall (how do the above elements interact?)
1/1
Composite score
9/10

i put it to my favorite :)

5/5 stars i like it ;)