Score: 10

"Very nice."

by: Jindo

date: March 21, 2007

I liked your games, but you also have a nice style for music, this is pretty cool :P.

Keep it up, reviewing your other songs right now :P!

Score: 10

"WOW"

by: soporific

date: March 6, 2007

Oh i get it, your scheme! to make people who love your excellent songs choke on a bottleneck so you can hear their pleas to expose your imiganation... but i'll issume that you simply dont have enough time. (you only made 2 songs and they both worth as much as gold)

Anyway, Usually, people like fancy songs with lots of dressing on them (extra instruments), but yours, is already explicit (i think this is spelt wrongly) enough to catch the attention of picky critics to say that your song is good.

I like the peaceful feeling that is added to your song, it reminds me of some kind of asylum. Its simplicity with the panio makes it the opposite of chaos, each tone sounds like there is an inner meaning to the choice.

Well, Good job, and i love your profile picture,
5/5

Score: 9

"Good... but gets a bit repetitive."

by: Karco

date: March 5, 2007

This is, I assume, the song you were having trouble with on the BBS? Hmm, now that you've submitted it, time for me to give you musical advice! =D

You open quietly... you could have developed your song with strings at the 5th or 9th measures, but apparently you didn't. Great job with note choice, I don't hear clashing notes. Do you know any musical theory?

Your piano is well-chosen, and its sound fits very nicely. The reeverb is a nice touch, too. ;)

You tell a story with this song, which is very nice. The lower harmony, playing a steady two notes in one measure every four measures, complements the upper part, which seems to wander and go off on its own, in a bit of a musical journey, dream, etc. of its own.

Admittedly, the song gets a bit boring after a while and it feels repetitive. I could see you building off of this with some chords and clever pianowork, and I honestly wouldn't be surprised if you did - judging by this song you probably know how. So do you? Had you taken this song a step further, I feel you could have mantained your intended direction and emotion while making the song an overall better one. Just a thought. ;)

I don't have much else to say or suggest about this song... I've said plenty already. I hope my advice helps! :) Why don't you stop by my audio page sometime and review my latest, After The Nova? Much appreciated, and keep up he good work. :)