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Such a great pace tgis song has, it gives me lyric ideas. In fact would it be fine that I added lyrics to this piece? I can't wait till you next piece!
I like the ominous mood at the beginning. That guitar sample isn’t my favorite, though, and the pacing is pretty slow. At :58, the percussion and pensive guitar/synth line mesh really well together. I think you could’ve used a stronger transition into 1:51, though, and the minimalism there made that part rather anti-climactic. The melodic content at 2:18 is enjoyable, but I still think the texture needs more fill. The more atmospheric part at 2:45 was a nice change, but this piece still feels a bit too drawn out and empty to serve as a stand-alone piece. Nice job with the phrasing into 3:38, but the minimalism thereafter felt really underwhelming again. I think you needed some sort of emotional height to hit this piece home. Overall, nice job with the mood and atmosphere, and the mixing is also fairly strong (despite a bit of a treble-heavy kick). The composition is a little lack-luster, but that’s your biggest problem here. Keep at it, Cursedsnake. ;)
Mixing, mastering, and balance
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
Instrumentation and sound design
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
Originality and uniqueness
Overall (how do the above elements interact?)
Drop caught me offguard dude, that hit HARD!
I can tell you used similar instruments and themes from "devils pact" but with a more electronic focus. I really enjoyed devils pact and i like seeing more exploration into the genre from you.
This song is not remotely afraid to try new things and explore other ideas and i love it :)
I really enjoyed the electro synth vibes you have goin on around 3 minutes in as well, it really adds emotional depth to a piece that would usually be focused around one thing.
i wish you good luck in the NGAUC final round!
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